I went to fanfic first and was like "she lied to me!" 'cause it wasn't there. But it's here! Whee!
Joshua Radin = love, by the way... Okay, onto the reviewage...
"Sam is forced to listen, to the sound of a man's heart breaking into tiny pieces, over and over again."
Guh! Still love this line. So sad! =(
"wants to tell the man to run, to leave this place, that no one is this important."
Oh, but that's so not true, Sammy! You don't get it, to Dean, you are that important. *sniffles*
"he wants to tell Dean he will remember, because Dean is a part of his soul and how can you forget part of your soul?"
Ah! God! Heart constriction!
"why every time he sees Dean reach for her, he wants to cry."
*whimpers*
"words not coming so easily now, not since Sam...and Dean can't finish that thought."
*whimpers some more*
"And the thought catches him off guard, because he is thinking about Sammy whilst his pants are around his ankles and a girl is plastered to his chest and he's only half hard."
*whimpergiggles*
This is so great darling! Still awesome! And I can't decide which I want you to work on more, this or Ask Your Brother, so I think I'll just demand that you do both at once, all hours of the day. How does that sound?
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Date: 2009-01-15 10:30 pm (UTC)Joshua Radin = love, by the way... Okay, onto the reviewage...
"Sam is forced to listen, to the sound of a man's heart breaking into tiny pieces, over and over again."
Guh! Still love this line. So sad! =(
"wants to tell the man to run, to leave this place, that no one is this important."
Oh, but that's so not true, Sammy! You don't get it, to Dean, you are that important. *sniffles*
"he wants to tell Dean he will remember, because Dean is a part of his soul and how can you forget part of your soul?"
Ah! God! Heart constriction!
"why every time he sees Dean reach for her, he wants to cry."
*whimpers*
"words not coming so easily now, not since Sam...and Dean can't finish that thought."
*whimpers some more*
"And the thought catches him off guard, because he is thinking about Sammy whilst his pants are around his ankles and a girl is plastered to his chest and he's only half hard."
*whimpergiggles*
This is so great darling! Still awesome! And I can't decide which I want you to work on more, this or Ask Your Brother, so I think I'll just demand that you do both at once, all hours of the day. How does that sound?