Wow. Awesome job with this. You have seriously done a masterful job with the episode.
My favorite FAVORITE part about this fic was how Sam kept having those thoughts like things were not quite right. Like he kept feeling like he should be saying something else or Dean should be doing something different. The comments you inserted in there were so spot on for the brothers, for their memories coming to their mind.
I was just so impressed with how well you inserted those little niggling thoughts. As though things were off....very impressive. It was done so well.
And did I mention how funny it is?? Their inner dialogue is hilarious and very in-keeping with the real Sam and Dean that is hidden within them.
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My favorite FAVORITE part about this fic was how Sam kept having those thoughts like things were not quite right. Like he kept feeling like he should be saying something else or Dean should be doing something different. The comments you inserted in there were so spot on for the brothers, for their memories coming to their mind.
I was just so impressed with how well you inserted those little niggling thoughts. As though things were off....very impressive. It was done so well.
And did I mention how funny it is?? Their inner dialogue is hilarious and very in-keeping with the real Sam and Dean that is hidden within them.